Bravo! I like your novella, congratulations on the accomplishment, your writing is very enjoyable.
You’re coldhearted bastard though you didn’t fix the moment when the thousand suns were extinguished in his eyes over the pregnancy. The love story went for a shit and it was just about power.
The real payoff was your summation of when it all started in 2020 I thought that was quite brilliant. I think I’ll re-read that a couple times.
Bravo! I like your novella, congratulations on the accomplishment, your writing is very enjoyable.
You’re coldhearted bastard though you didn’t fix the moment when the thousand suns were extinguished in his eyes over the pregnancy. The love story went for a shit and it was just about power.
The real payoff was your summation of when it all started in 2020 I thought that was quite brilliant. I think I’ll re-read that a couple times.
Well done